Dil walks towards Ine angrily as Ine backs up towards the door of the room. Dil says, "What is it about you two-leggers that makes you think you're superior?" Ine looks nervous and says, "I-I don't! I was just--" Dil steps even closer, and Ine sits down on the floor, holding up a hand in front of him. Dil says, "Didn't think you'd have to condescend to share a room with some kind of wild animal, is that it?" Looking scared, Ine says, "No! That's not what I--" We see a close up of Dil's face, practically nose to nose with Ine's. Dil glares at him and says, "Well, I've got news for you, so pay attention!" Ine looks frightened and says, "I..." Then Dil grins and pulls out a digital camera, chuckling and snapping a picture of Ine, who is still cowering in front of the door.
Lark says…
I enjoyed ratcheting up the tension in the first few panels of this page, only to break it completely with Dil’s mischievous giggle! I remember it being a very deliberate choice on a number of levels. First, and probably most visibly, the background changes from a light red, to darker, to darkest of all, and then suddenly back to the regular color of the wall behind them. Second, Dil and Ine’s expressions progress form annoyed and concerned, respectively, to furious and scared, only for Dil to break the charade on the fourth panel. Third, the panels zoom in during the first three panels until the frame is completely filled with Ine and Dil, sitting nose to nose, and then in the fourth panel it zooms back out to show the whole side of the room. Finally, Ine and Dil change in relative position with one another. Ine starts standing, then as he backs away into the door behind him, he begins to sink to the floor, then in the third panel he is literally lower than Dil, reversing their status from the first panel, until in the fourth panel Dil sits down to snap a pic, putting them at roughly equal level.
Since comics are such a visual medium, there are a lot of tricks like this you can use. And since space is such a precious and limited commodity in comics, it is often helpful to layer as many of these visual cues on top of each other as possible to really drive home the message!
Published: Aug 5, 2014
Smile Ine! You're on Candid Camera! (Whoa, did I just date myself?)